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« Thread Started on Jul 17, 2007, 7:35pm » | |
Light in the abyss
which has the stench of death
upon the pain in the hearts of many
this light help the lost traveler
who is sick and pale
Dark in the heart
which shows the spirit of once self
upon its' life
The dark feeds on the pain
and drinks the blood of all.
Twighlight all around
which is everthing that ever was
upon every soul and life
The twighlight helps even the power of the dark and light
and makes things like shadows upon the land.
Twighlight in the mind of the dark and light
By: Kila
Yes I wrote this poem. I had just wrote this a few seconds ago too.
This is a song I just wrote;
Dark wing of the shadow
tumbling down
stealing the loved ones
and making no sound
Pain that your feeling
when blood running through
death upon you
what will you do
A marraige in ruin
by loved ones curse
who is to steal
in no other words
why must I be that
which fears in the stars
which up high
stealing the soul
while 13 die."
One of my character (a dark angel) Sings this to himself. He hates who he is. and this song tells a little about Dark Angels.
I wrote this when writing my story. The story is about shiyotso's life and love. This song was the song his mother sang the day after his birth.
' Sweet little child
close your sweet eyes
let the night watch you
and silent your mind
I will watch over you
make no sound
till you awake
sweet child of mine.'
There was a second verse,but I can't find it.lol
Posted by shiyotso on Yesterday at 2:01pm
Thank you for both of your say on both things.
I have always writen dark poems. My life has not been that good, but Twighlight in the mind of the dark and light was just something that come to me. I have always loved Ying Yang stuff. I am also kinda like the light to my Boyfriend... He is the dark(he is like shiyo,and I created shiyo before I met him. So Our relationship has enspired many of my poems and song.
My song just above this post,*points up* I had written in one of shiyo's stories. When my boyfriend saw it... He told me his real mother had song it to him when he was little. Strange...But true.
Oops I am talking to much again lol.
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« Reply #1 on Jul 18, 2007, 12:22pm » | |
*claps continuoualsly*Wow!! that's amazing u can think of something like that so quick!! ^^
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« Reply #2 on Jul 18, 2007, 3:48pm » | |
Thanks lol *bows low*
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« Reply #3 on Jul 19, 2007, 3:58am » | |
Wow.. that was pretty well-written for something written so fast! Ooooh... Darkness... >> Light... Twilight. *tries to pronounce* Tah-why-lite. =\ I used to always pronounce it wrong.
What inspired you? =)
PS. Hope you don't mind that I moved this to the Poetry board. =3
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« Reply #4 on Jul 19, 2007, 2:01pm » | |
Thank you for both of your say on both things.
I have always writen dark poems. My life has not been that good, but Twighlight in the mind of the dark and light was just something that come to me. I have always loved Ying Yang stuff. I am also kinda like the light to my Boyfriend... He is the dark(he is like shiyo,and I created shiyo before I met him. So Our relationship has enspired many of my poems and song.
My song just above this post,*points up* I had written in one of shiyo's stories. When my boyfriend saw it... He told me his real mother had song it to him when he was little. Strange...But true.
Oops I am talking to much again lol.
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« Reply #5 on Jul 20, 2007, 4:10am » | |
Ohh, to avoid double posts (or triple posts in this case), just put your messages all in the same post. ^^ You can modify your own posts, see? I'll let you away with it now but generally we're not meant to double-post... ><
Huh.. so the lullaby you made up... coincidentally was the same as the one your boyf's mum sang to him???? WHOAAA!!! That's neat...
That Dark Angel poem is really good... I like it! ^^ It's creepy yet so interesting... I think it's great~~
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« Reply #6 on Jul 21, 2007, 3:31am » | |
I agree creppy yet great huh? heh... Well- todays my last day here in Indiana...and boy am I gonna miss it here. With Amber and her poems her family and everything....if I make it onto my plane without crying that'll be a feat in itself. I must say....seeing these poems of yours makes me even sadder- maybe I'm just that much closer to you? I don't know....but keep up your writeing while i'm gone ok? Love you...
~Love and Peace
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« Reply #7 on Aug 19, 2007, 3:00am » | |
ya know shiyo you ain't half bad.... *thinks again* on second thought your darn good... stay with the gloom it suits you.
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« Reply #8 on Aug 19, 2007, 1:44pm » | |
Dorks...that is what you are. Broc and pase, my two dorks. Hey and thanks....WAIT SO YOUR SAYING I SUCK AT HAPPY THINGS?
heee*gives both pase and broc a hug. *
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« Reply #9 on Aug 21, 2007, 1:27pm » | |
no not really ,I'm just saying that the darkness is what your most connected to so your more intune to it.
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« Reply #10 on Oct 3, 2008, 11:42am » | |
Confusion of the mind
Standing in one single spot
Thinking of the many ways
How my life has turned around
How is this going to play?
Love for one all the same
While liking someone else
Insanity is all I now have,
When all of this plays out
Days pass me by
But I stand here alone
Thoughts that hurt my soul
Why do I try?
Why do I fight?
When in the end I’m cold.
All the memories and all the pain
Forces within my head
I want to win but still I can’t
Maybe this is the end
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« Reply #11 on Oct 10, 2008, 12:32am » | |
Ahhh I liked that poem but at the same time I didn't coz it's gloomy and gloom doesn't work for me. >_<
It's not the end!!!!!!
.. Just.. felt I had to say that.
Keep up the poetry~ You haven't posted much poetry in a while. =/ No pressure, though.
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